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Boba_Fett
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PostSubject: Hey guys PLEASE HELP WITH THIS   Hey guys PLEASE HELP WITH THIS EmptyWed Aug 18, 2010 11:55 pm

Okay i'm making a website for a teacher and this is the rough draft. Everything aside please tell me what you think?

What can i do to improve.


http://hstrial-taylorcounsel.intuitwebsites.com/staff.html


Thanks if you can give some feed back.
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PostSubject: Re: Hey guys PLEASE HELP WITH THIS   Hey guys PLEASE HELP WITH THIS EmptyThu Aug 19, 2010 12:00 am

Wow thats pretty good. But the text in the actual articles just, well at least to me, seems like its a little to squished together. Maybe a new font. But other than that, its pretty good.
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PostSubject: Re: Hey guys PLEASE HELP WITH THIS   Hey guys PLEASE HELP WITH THIS EmptyThu Aug 19, 2010 12:01 am

okay cool thanks Jub. I'll space the sentences. anything else?
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PostSubject: Re: Hey guys PLEASE HELP WITH THIS   Hey guys PLEASE HELP WITH THIS EmptyThu Aug 19, 2010 2:39 am

its good but i think u should add more to it, and revise a bit more
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